Focus: Feedback from Ms. B.
1) USE THE STRUCTURE!!!! It is there for a reason. Every story should have TWO quotes.
2) Be sure your intro is a UNIQUE hook. Most of our stories start the same. Review the slides about leads. This is the intro to your page and will determine if a reader takes the time to look at your page or not.
3) Use quotes that are specific to your topic/story. It should not be something that can be interchanged on another page.
4) Quotes should provide NEW perspectives, not just repeating the thoughts that most people have.
5) Keep the pages POSITIVE. These should be a positive representation of BTHS and the classes we offer.
6) All stories about subjects need to be tied to the courses/classes we offer.
7) While you can use the phrase "reimagined" in the story, don't overuse it, and don't only use it in the intro or conclusion.
8) Conclusions needs to be more than one sentence. They should wrap up the second quote, tie the two quotes together, and connect back to the intro without repeating any of it.
9) I am here to help! You can sign up to work with me during my office hours Here
Objectives:
- Review Copy Rules & Formula
- Finalize Spreads
- Review the name perfect & caption perfect.
Closure: Discuss any last minute needs with Mrs. Cream to complete your deadline.
